Hey there Exxie, We'd like it if you could make a few changes.

First, the history section should include a brief summary on his canon past. Wiki links should only be used as a supplemental. Try to limit this additional summary to about one paragraph.

Also, the question about canon vs AU differences in the form you filled out does not reflect any physical changes or personality changes. Please reply to this comment with all deviations from canon. History alone is not enough.