singing_arda: (Mark!)
Mods of Arda Marred ([personal profile] singing_arda) wrote 2016-04-16 06:47 am (UTC)

Re: Revisions / Questions

History looks good! Got a little more to go over though so hang in there.

I see now you have "psychological conditioning" in abilities. It's not clear if you meant he was psychologically conditioned, or if he is able to implement that on others.

I'm a little confused about saying above that he is trained mostly in SW weapons, but saying "most forms of weaponry" in his abilities. The typical types of weapons available at AM would be stuff like swords, axes, bows and arrows, etc. - Do you feel Finn would be able to use this sort of weaponry also?

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