Hi again Theta! I've got a couple of revisions and questions to start us on the way.
First, Re: History section - we're looking more for Finn's personal history, and not so much the history of the movie as a whole. Please edit your history to streamline it into being more directly about Finn.
Re: Abilities section - "extensive weapons training" is a bit vague. Do you mean only SW firearms, or were there other things involved in this training as well (martial arts, computers, AT-AT Husbandry and breeding?) If you could break it down a little further that would be great.
Question! Finn's blaster - what kind of power source does it use, and will the source of power be available in Arda?
Revisions / Questions
First, Re: History section - we're looking more for Finn's personal history, and not so much the history of the movie as a whole. Please edit your history to streamline it into being more directly about Finn.
Re: Abilities section - "extensive weapons training" is a bit vague. Do you mean only SW firearms, or were there other things involved in this training as well (martial arts, computers,
AT-AT Husbandry and breeding?) If you could break it down a little further that would be great.Question! Finn's blaster - what kind of power source does it use, and will the source of power be available in Arda?