Hi Ferus! Glad to see you here. I've got a few things to go over before we get started.
Quick revision - our word minimum on Personality is 100, at our count you have 87. Please add another sentence or two relevant to Dorian's personality.
Now a couple of questions - disclaimer, I am mostly canon blind.
Our canon Dorian has an ability called Spirit Mark which we put a small limitation on - does your Dorian have this ability?
Re: the cat - It looks like this is just a normal cat, and doesn't need animal companion info, but since you listed it I just want to make sure - is Princess magical in some way and fit our criteria for an animal companion?
Revisions / Questions
Quick revision - our word minimum on Personality is 100, at our count you have 87. Please add another sentence or two relevant to Dorian's personality.
Now a couple of questions - disclaimer, I am mostly canon blind.
Our canon Dorian has an ability called Spirit Mark which we put a small limitation on - does your Dorian have this ability?
Re: the cat - It looks like this is just a normal cat, and doesn't need animal companion info, but since you listed it I just want to make sure - is Princess magical in some way and fit our criteria for an animal companion?