It's looking great for the most part, but there's a few little tweaks that I'd like to see before approving the claim:
- explain super briefly what "numbered" and "echo" mean - knowing Liam, it might be good to mention that he is a well-intentioned but kind of fail vegan, as that might create CR opportunities
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- explain super briefly what "numbered" and "echo" mean
- knowing Liam, it might be good to mention that he is a well-intentioned but kind of fail vegan, as that might create CR opportunities